Not bad, I like it.
I’m a big fan of marbles and marble related games so this is a welcomed sight. The game runs silky smooth at 60fps on my old beat up laptop and I don’t see any bugs or clipping when it comes to the collision of the marbles. I also like how if the marbles rolls off the track they try to get back on, good touch. Art is good and I am in interested in what you can do with the track maker. Background music is okay, fits the kind of game this is. My only peace of critique is that I would enjoy having a little bit more interactivity with the marbles. I cannot wait to see the full game, good work so far.
What do you mean by more interactivity with the marbles?
First thing, nice perspective . Your pose and anatomy are good and overall I love your lines. I am very eager to see what you can do with pen and ink. Can't wait to see your skills develop as an artist, your off to a good start. Just remember your light source and texture while shading and you will do just fine...
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